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Comment on fancy dress ideas needed urgentlyy? by jeeez

jeeez — Thu, 11 Mar 2010 20:46:38 +0000

beachball
britney spears
baby
boat
baguel
BELLY DANCER
blue whale
board game
bacon
beanbag

the list is endless. personally I think the bellydancer is the best

Comment on Hey Mormons: How do the General Authorities eat their Reeses Peanut Butter Cups? by Dane H

Dane H — Thu, 11 Mar 2010 14:55:02 +0000

Normally I don’t find humor or a point in your postings, but I gotta say that I did chuckle at numbers 1 and 2.

Comment on I’m writing a story and I’m having trouble naming the chapters. Would you please help? by Friday

Friday — Thu, 11 Mar 2010 00:32:11 +0000

Chapter 1: “Charming” (refers to both the spell and Ash’s personality)
Chapter 2: “Type A” (relevant but not too revealing)
Chapter 3: “Bitten” (playing on the vampire theme but obviously about the apple)

Just a few ideas. Hopefully that helps.
Friday

Comment on AnSwEr Me? by Vegas Man

Vegas Man — Wed, 10 Mar 2010 18:07:13 +0000

i bet your all those expresions only your 500 pounds fatter your bald and your going out with grampas and your like 30

fuckin fat azz

Comment on fancy dress ideas needed urgentlyy? by Roxxana

Roxxana — Wed, 10 Mar 2010 04:02:16 +0000

Beach Barbie- wear a pink bikkini and sunglasses
Brilliant- wear round glasses, pencil skirt, and nice coat.
Borat- talk in a difficult accent, wear weird clothes!
Bot (robot)- move around like a robot and wear same color clothing.
Bum- street clothes
Buff- puff out your chest and wear like 3 shirts under your top shirt to look muscly.

Comment on I’m writing a story and I’m having trouble naming the chapters. Would you please help? by Unpretty

Unpretty — Tue, 09 Mar 2010 02:00:00 +0000

My advice is not to use “I (did this)” and “I (did that)” so much because it all tends to blend together in a way. Obviously, the story is first person, which makes it a harder perspective to write in without using “I” so much, but a lot of readers will get irritated with the story if their eyes keep drifting over the same spots two or three times because the same word keeps appearing. The story loses its appeal.

The chapters are too short, too. Basically, you could take the three chapters you have and blend them into one, and still add more. Two or three paragraphs don’t make a chapter. Try expanding on each chapter…for instance, when you introduce Ash, you describe him, then cut it off by saying that the character has been with him for three years. But, how did a witch meet a vampire? Try broadening the chapters by adding hints of personalization…don’t tell the story. Let the story tell itself.

I know you weren’t looking for advice there…just wanted to give you a few tips.

As for chapter naming, sometimes I come up with a chapter title right away. It just pops into my mind and I know it fits. Other times, I leave it alone and come back to it later. Sometimes I don’t bother with naming the chapter at all.

If you want to name the chapter, don’t be too obvious…but don’t be too vague either. You want to capture the readers’ attention. For instance, in chapter 3, you could call it something like “Sour Apples”. At first, the reader will see that they are eating green apples and figure you are making reference to that. Then, they will see that it could be because of the cousins’ Friday night visit.

Comment on so one day he likes me and one day he doesn’t? by newcreation

newcreation — Mon, 08 Mar 2010 19:56:54 +0000

take time to know each other better and to know u guys real feeling towards each other

Comment on Hey Mormons: How do the General Authorities eat their Reeses Peanut Butter Cups? by jane d

jane d — Mon, 08 Mar 2010 05:19:56 +0000

I’m not Mormon but I think this was a little on the rude side.
I don’t think it really matter what anyone thinks. Leave them alone let them worship Joe Smith. I don’t think they are hurting anyone… people can believe what ever the heck they want. But I do understand your point of view.

Comment on AnSwEr Me? by Xander

Xander — Sun, 07 Mar 2010 13:06:44 +0000

2 feet tall?
Are you, like, a giant treasure-troll or something?

Comment on fancy dress ideas needed urgentlyy? by Rhoady

Rhoady — Sun, 07 Mar 2010 11:03:27 +0000

I can just think of Barbie or a bimbo

EDIT: Ohh go for the flintstones Betty suggestion if you can! That’d be cool.