How are these poems I wrote?

tall babes
Jim asked:

I wrote these two poems. Are they good? Be honest, please.

Someday this will all be okay, everything will go away. One day. I don’t know how long, please babe, stay strong. Everything will be just fine, just give it some time. Be strong, be patient, all of this won’t happen in an instant. Life’s a wild ride, no matter what, I’ll always be by your side.

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And for tonight, we choose to fight or flight. Fight away the problem, or just go ahead and run. So if I can help you, let me know. I’ll help you make-do, or I’ll be below. But as long as I live, I’ll always give and give. Helping you along the way, or catching you when you fall. Seeing if you’re okay, just making sure this problem isn’t too tall.






One Response to 'How are these poems I wrote?'

  1. The dude - January 28th, 2010 at 5:17 pm

    i like the first one it’s pretty cool


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