can you..?

tall babes
pinkygirl m asked:

find six punctuation errors in this paragraph:
Tha tall lefty wound up and let the first pitch fly.It buzzed by low and outside.Ball one for as long as he could remember there had always been pictures and home videos of him as a toddler,swinging a plastic bat and throwing his wiffle ball.Born to play ball” Mike always thought about himself. He had played T-ball ,and little league before **** Ruth league.
im helping my sister in her homework and that question was in her L.arts book
can you please write them






4 Responses to 'can you..?'

  1. dualspace - May 12th, 2010 at 9:16 am

    Yes, I can find six punctuation errors in that paragraph!

    I can also find a whole lot of other things wrong with that paragraph. Please tell me that didn’t come from a textbook or a teacher!

  2. Patrick Fisher - May 14th, 2010 at 11:48 am

    Oh, God! That’s unreadable! Six should be no problem for you.

  3. Jimdog - May 15th, 2010 at 3:32 am

    Yup) theres six. punctuation! error’s;

  4. Corinne S - May 15th, 2010 at 10:09 pm

    Ball one! For as——
    toddler; swinging—
    “Born to play ball,”
    ball and—–
    Little League
    Babe Ruth League


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