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	<title>Comments on: Can someone edit my story? Please?</title>
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		<title>By: Not just any chick</title>
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		<dc:creator>Not just any chick</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 28 Jan 2010 16:03:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Oh, dear, dear, dear.  If you&#039;ve got a publisher working with you, you&#039;ve most likely violated the terms of your contract OR blown the deal entirely.  Publishers are not in the habit of paying good money for something you&#039;re letting people read on the internet for free.  It&#039;s bad business.  And why isn&#039;t your publisher using their own editor?  

At any rate, the only editing advise I can give you is this - two paragraphs does not make a chapter.  Honestly, start all over.</description>
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<p>At any rate, the only editing advise I can give you is this &#8211; two paragraphs does not make a chapter.  Honestly, start all over.</p>
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